On a hot afternoon , I sat beneath a tree for a while,
Wondering where actually, I lost my smile.
Tall and erect stood that mountain, ahead me with pride,
And wind embraced him with deep passion as his new bride.
He laughs on me and, teases me and my kind.
Deep green valley witnessing this, never minds.
“You human beings are so weak and cripple” he says.
“Running away from yourself every time when you tripple” he says.
” You need us when you are lost”
“But never ever have you understood how much true love cost??”
True love hummn, I smirked on him and thought
What a time, even this mountain is thinking I never fought.
I wanted to yell back at him so loud.
That even would have shivered his lingering cloud.
And say “You my friend don’t judge me and my kind”.
“We can tame you and deprive energy from your lovely wind.”
His strength and his valour are admirable.
But we humans are for sure most adaptable.
I did every argument in my mind, but said nothing.
I stood in front of him and listened everything silently, nodding.
I wrote this with only one thing in mind , that is, every time we human in this today modern world are striving to convince our point or to win every argument of a day. This struggle of us is unnecessary and unworthy but still we do it for the sake of it. Unknowingly it has become our habit.
Sometimes we must be silent and listen to everything that is happening around us.
Stay awake and listen to everyone. It is fun to listen and understand someone else prespective.
Copyright ©VISHAL RAUT
Beautiful and engaging poem. I feel like there is so much the nature is trying to tell us everyday that would help us live this life but we never listen. Great message at the end too!
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Thanks a lot 😊😊
Felt better that message is reaching to all of you.
I am amazed most of time with all the offerings of natural to us, mankind.
We on the other hand has always exploited nature to its limits.
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Yes, the nature offers so much endlessly.
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‘Sometimes we must be silent and listen to everything that is happening around us.
Stay awake and listen to everyone. It is fun to listen and understand someone else prespective.’ Loved these last lines in your poem Vishal, though the whole poem is so beautifully lined. We need to be silent to listen to others and even nature that talks to us at each and every step of our way. Great.
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Thanks for appreciation and I am glad you liked it and yes listening is the most important habit we must learn as quick as possible. Mother nature has so much to teach us, all we have to do is listen to her.
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Yes Vishal, beautifully written.
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You are right, it has become a part of our life..simply arguing… At times we need to wear other’s shoe also…
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Yup 😊😊😆
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To have a still mind and have silence is wonderful 🙂
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Silence within us will dwell only when we practice it twice a day, I have been trying it desperately to practice some silence.
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How I learned silence was this way.
Every time a thought came into my head I said loudly to myself NO after a while the thoughts gave up trying and I achieved silence.
🙂
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Yeah I know of this method, read it in a book once. Even I tried it but gave up soon. I will try once again.
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It will work this time 😉
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Yup I hope so, I will let you know for sure.
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A most beautiful message and a very much needed one too. It is always lovely to come across those who respect Nature, her unconditional love and endless teachings 🙂
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Thanks a lot for such a lovely comment. 😊😊😊
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This is really good! I love the meaning you meant to convey and how you did it.
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Thanks 😊😊😆😆.
It means a lot to me. I am overwhelmed.
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Conveyed a beautiful message..💜
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😊😊😊😆
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Learning to listen and interpret is the most essential talent! Well crafted poem! 🙂
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Thanks Prakash, today we have great speakers and leaders around us but very few genuine listeners.
Hope we all try and listen to most of the people around us.
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